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Nicolas Sutro's avatar

But…by writing has the third man stayed silent?

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

Maybe this is a note that fell out of his private diary and found its way here. 😛

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Samuel Frison's avatar

Muitas sutilezas, belas imagens!

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

Obrigado, meu amigo.

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Jodi Sh. Doff's avatar

Oh, this is heartbreaking. I’m so sorry. Beautifully written, tender, protective. ❤️ the dog’s owner is quite obviously an idiot.

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

Nooooo! He's quite sweet, just lost in his own world. 🙂

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Patty Siedler's avatar

Day and night, it haunts me

The kiss I never had.

S.K. Russell

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

I love that quote, Patty! I didn't know it… it's very apt

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Rostislava Pankova-Karadjova's avatar

Strikingly beautiful micro fiction piece!

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

Thank you. I really appreciate you reading this and my other pieces, and liking them. 🤗

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Rostislava Pankova-Karadjova's avatar

I was reading them while locked out of the house, and your writing inspired me to write a story too. 🙏😊

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Ollie Redfern's avatar

Oh, I’m glad! Will you share it here on Substack? Please let me know, if yes!

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